The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
These diagrams illustrate the alters that happened in secondary school since it opened. it is clear from the maps that the changes started from 1980 until 2010.
According to
it is shown in 1980 all the houses were removed to be a car parking and extra building for the school to the science major. Next,
the farmland on the left side of the corner in 1980 was a sports field next to the playground.
Lastly
, the alters in 2010, all the sports areas were replaced to be inside the playground in front of the main building of the school. However
, the size of the car parking was increased to take up all the areas around the old parking place.
To sum up
, we could say that the huge changes were in the car parking and replaced the houses, but after all of this
, the main building is still the same from 1950.Submitted by qazwsxcvbnm1452 on
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