The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart illustrates the number
of enquiries
received over by the tourist information office for three two-month span
in 2011. It is clear from the graph that Change to a plural noun
spans
number
of tourists who received in person, the most ratio increased.
Change the article
a number
the number
According to
what is shown, number
of Change the article
the number
enquiries
received by latter, email and telephone decreased relatively. To begin
with January, they were close to each other by numbers. After that, witnessed a small dip for both. Then
, in February amount of letter
and Fix the agreement mistake
letters
email
got Fix the agreement mistake
emails
a
soar Correct article usage
apply
while
amount
of Add an article
the amount
telephone
climbed respectively. After a Fix the agreement mistake
telephones
while
, number
of Change the article
the number
enquiries
which
received by letter and email continued Correct pronoun usage
apply
decreased
until May. Change the verb form
to decrease
Then
, it recovered and Add a missing verb
was consistented
consistented
Correct your spelling
consistent
in
Change preposition
at
same
level. Change the article
the same
While
the ratio of letter
decreased, the amount of telephone got a rocket in the numbers.
The most striking feature of the graph is, Fix the agreement mistake
letters
figures
Correct article usage
the figures
of
Change preposition
for
enquiries
received in person, it was the least figure. Then
, witnessed a soar until March. After that, it got a rocket until became the highest ratio in January.
To sum up
, we could say that the highest number
was in January, which contained by
1800 Change preposition
apply
enquiries
, that was
for people received in person.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, enquiries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rocket" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "soar" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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