The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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number

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of

enquiries

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received over by the tourist information office for three two-month

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in 2011. It is clear from the graph that

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a number

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of tourists who received in person, the most ratio increased.

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what is shown,

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number

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of

enquiries

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received by latter, email and telephone decreased relatively.

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with January, they were close to each other by numbers. After that, witnessed a small dip for both.

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, in February amount of

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and

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got

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soar

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amount

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the amount

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of

telephone

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climbed respectively. After a

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,

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number

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the number

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of

enquiries

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which

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received by letter and email continued

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until May.

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, it recovered and

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was consistented

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consistented

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consistent

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same

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the same

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level.

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the ratio of

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decreased, the amount of telephone got a rocket in the numbers. The most striking feature of the graph is,

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of

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for

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enquiries

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received in person, it was the least figure.

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, witnessed a soar until March. After that, it got a rocket until became the highest ratio in January.

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, we could say that the highest

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was in January, which contained

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1800

enquiries

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, that

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for people received in person.