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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The images illustrate the differences between the current Southwest
Airport
 and the new version after its development.
Overall
, the main changes can be seen
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 the enlargement of 10 more
departure
 gates and the additional amenities
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 the waiting areas. Is it clear that the current
airport
 is smaller than the new purposed design where the
departure
 gate area will be enlarged with 18 doors
.
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 A sky train will be added to optimize
passengers
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 flow to reach the gates,
while
 in the actual
airport
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 there is a walkway that communicates them. The second main changes in the future
airport
 are the addition of many services in the
departure
 and arrival areas before the security and passport controls.
At the end
 of departures they are planning to add backdrop service
while
 in arrivals that used to be empty, there will be a coffee shop, an ATM and a car hiring desk. They will
also
 improve the waiting area adding a duty-free shopping centre before arriving at the plane
departure
 section.
To conclude
, the lay plan for the new Southwest
Airport
 development will almost double its capacity with additional flying exits and
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extra services
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 the waiting area for the customers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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