Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph below illustrates a comparison between the films that were screened in the
UK
and
Australia
in 2001 and a second graph comparing the
differnet
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different
evolution of cinema
admissions
between the two countries. It is observed that US films were the most screened in both
UK
and
Australia
. In the
UK
, their films were the second most screened movies
while
Australia
screened other movies from different countries.
During
Change preposition
From
show examples
1975 to 2005, the
UK
admissions
to cinemas were always greater than the
admissions
in
Australia
but both increased from 1985 onwards.
UK
Correct article usage
The UK
show examples
reached a peak of 170 million
admissions
between 2000 and 2005
while
Australia
did not surpass 100 million
admissions
.
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