The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
Given is a graph revealing the number of tourists who both stayed on a cruise and
island
visited a Caribbean Use synonyms
island
from 2010 to 2017 . Use synonyms
Overall
, when we look general rates of a graph , we can clearly see people who selected Linking Words
a
Change the article
an
island
to cruise ships.
After Use synonyms
remain
steady between 2010 and 2011 , the Wrong verb form
remaining
rate
of visitors staying on the Use synonyms
island
climbed to almost 1.5 in 2012 . Use synonyms
This
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rate
stayed constant from 2013 to 2015 and the next year Use synonyms
this
number fell slightly less than 1.5.Linking Words
At the end
of Linking Words
this
figure , a steady Linking Words
grow
seen in 2017 .
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growth
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
rate
of visitors staying on cruise ships watchedUse synonyms
fluctuate
between 2010 and 2012 . There was a dramatic increase from 2013 to 2017 accounting for 0.5 to 2 .
It is Wrong verb form
fluctuated
also
interesting to note that , the Linking Words
rate
of total reached a peak in Use synonyms
last
year at 3.5 .Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, rate with synonyms.
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