The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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Given is a graph revealing the number of tourists who both stayed on a cruise and
island
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visited a Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017 .
Overall
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, when we look general rates of a graph , we can clearly see people who selected
a
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island
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to cruise ships. After
remain
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steady between 2010 and 2011 , the
rate
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of visitors staying on the
island
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climbed to almost 1.5 in 2012 .
This
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rate
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stayed constant from 2013 to 2015 and the next year
this
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number fell slightly less than 1.5.
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of
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figure , a steady
grow
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seen in 2017 .
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, the
rate
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of visitors staying on cruise ships watched
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between 2010 and 2012 . There was a dramatic increase from 2013 to 2017 accounting for 0.5 to 2 . It is
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interesting to note that , the
rate
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of total reached a peak in
last
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year at 3.5 .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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