The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
Given is a graph revealing the number of tourists who both stayed on a cruise and
island
visited a Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017 . Overall
, when we look general rates of a graph , we can clearly see people who selected a
Change the article
an
island
to cruise ships.
After remain
steady between 2010 and 2011 , the Wrong verb form
remaining
rate
of visitors staying on the island
climbed to almost 1.5 in 2012 . This
rate
stayed constant from 2013 to 2015 and the next year this
number fell slightly less than 1.5.At the end
of this
figure , a steady grow
seen in 2017 .
Replace the word
growth
On the other hand
, the rate
of visitors staying on cruise ships watched fluctuate
between 2010 and 2012 . There was a dramatic increase from 2013 to 2017 accounting for 0.5 to 2 .
It is Wrong verb form
fluctuated
also
interesting to note that , the rate
of total reached a peak in last
year at 3.5 .Submitted by steam_ahmet2004 on
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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