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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

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Some
people
 believe that building
such
 as
apartment
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apartments
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 and houses should be designed to
last
 a long time.
while
 others believe that
instead
 of doing that, Provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. In
this
, essay I am going to write about both views and draw my own conclusion. In terms of advantages, when we build the buildings quickly,
that is
 cheaper than other ways. The main reason provided to support
this
 claim is that, if the builders take a short spar they take a little money. Another point we have to consider to it, all of us prefer to complete our
work
 quickly.
That is
 mean it is good for the builders and the owners. To illustrate, in Yemen if the builders. finish their
work
 fastly,
people
 consider they are
professinols
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professionals
.
However
, there are many issues. when the nations do their
work
 rapidly.
Firstly
, they can not do it Very well.
This
 is because, when you do me thing Jome slowly
that is
 better.
For example
,
such
 as me if I do anything rapidly I can not do it nicely. In
this
 practical case, all
people
 want houses for all their life.
Secondly
, if you spent all your money house.
Then
, the problems around you see that you will feel upset about that. In conclusion,
although
 plenty of
people
 like to finish their
work
, quickly, I believe
that is
 not true.
Also
, we should be patient.
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