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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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The given charts represent current and future developments planned for the
sports
centre
 on the university grounds. There are enormous plans arranged for the university’s
sports
centre
 on each
part
 of the
map
. Turning to the details of the
map
's present outlook, currently on both the west and east side of the
map
 outdoor court is located. In the middle
part
 of the university
sports
 , the central
pool
 is above the reception surrounded by facilities
such
 as changing room, which
also
 serves as a gym area. In the right corner of the
pool
 is the place for sitting and relaxing. Looking at the details of the future development of the
sports
centre
, on the left
part
 of the
map
 a leisure
pool
 will be constructed,
also
 changing rooms
also
 will be multiplied with people’s comfort. Despite the swimming
pool
 will stay the same size (25m), the area of the gym will be expanded in the future. Outdoor courts on the east
part
 of the
map
 will be replaced with a
sports
 hall. Nearby, the
sports
 hall there will be added two dance studios and a cafe in order to enlarge the resources of the university
sports
centre
.
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