The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, between 2000 and 2009. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates how many
houses
were built yearly in Derby and Nottingham respectively from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, both places generally increased in terms of house construction over a ten-year period.
However
, Derby’s figure had a relatively steady increase
while
Nottingham’s
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had peaks and troughs over time. Regarding the newly built
houses
in Derby, it is apparent that the sum in Derby increased more than
a
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double from less than 50 in 2000 to around 120 in 2003.
This
number levelled off for the next four years before the dramatic increase in 2008, rising to 280
houses
and
reached
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the maximum of just under 350 homes in 2009.
On the other hand
, the number of Nottingham stayed around 50 in the year 2000 and 2001 before the significant fall to 20
houses
in 2002. The figure
then
climbed gradually in the following 3 years to 80
houses
in 2005. The number fluctuated drastically between 2006 and 2009, reaching the low points of approximately 0 new
houses
in 2006 and 2008
accordingly
and high points of 190 and 250
houses
in 2007 and 2009 respectively.
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