The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories
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The first picture displays the total abroad sales of a nation in some industries from 2015 to 2016 and the other illustration survey lays off the value change in each of the departments. In brief, the writing will be presented in $billions and percentages. In the overview, the total earnings and the production values in all categories are increasing over a year, except for gems and jewellery.
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, the increase and decrease do not change the rank of export.
First,
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petroleum and agricultural products were slightly increasing from the previous year, noting only some little billion dollars still around the same amount as their previous year with fuel at slightly above $60 bill,with 3% growth and agricultural at around $ 30 bill, 0.81% rise respectively.
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, engineered and textiles had quite a jump on their export graph and values change, marking an average 8% to 15% growth in 2016.
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, gems and jewellery,
on the other hand
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, drop slightly in 2016 with a decline (5.18%) and touching just above $40 billion in earnings.
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, engineered goods were able to be at the same level as oil by 2016, reaching a similar $60 billion income. In conclusion, textiles were still the lowest and gasoline the highest in exporting activity for the country.
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