the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
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The pictures illustrate the variation in some product values of one country's exports between 2015 and 2016. There are 2 illustrations,
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the differences in earnings for each category, and the second one is the percentage change.
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, there are 5 things that are shown in the tables, some of them which are petroleum and engineered goods had the highest number for export commodities.
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, on the other side, textiles had the lowest ratio, but they had the biggest value of them all. Some products are not as well-liked as others,
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agricultural items and
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had the smallest points at around 0.81%.
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, the other less exported stuff, textiles, had the best price an average of 15.24%. In conclusion, petroleum products and engineering supplies had a stable number for their cost (3% and 8.5% respectively).
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their value, the market earnings most came from these two, both came slightly at 50 billion in 2015 and
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but not least, in the following year, both had reached more than 60 billion.
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