the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spemd on food or drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.

the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spemd on food or drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.
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The presented table compares the percentages of monthly expenses in four categories in five countries in Europe , namely France, Germany, the UK, Turkey, and Spain.
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, it can be seen that people in Europe spend most of their
income
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on food and refreshment and renting or buying houses
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they spend the least of their money on buying new clothes or jackets. In the United Kingdom, the fees for housing account for 37% of household
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, which is 4% and 6% higher than that of Germany and France respectively.
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, people in these three countries spend a quarter of their
income
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on food and drink, which is two times more than they spend on leisure activities.
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, they spend no more than 15% of their
income
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on clothing, of which Germany spends 15%, France and the British spend 7% and 1% of their salary respectively. As for the remaining two countries, the expense
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food and drink is the highest, with 36% and 31% of
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spend on them in Turkey and Spain respectively.
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, they spend about 20% of their salary on housing expenses.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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