The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate the appearance of a particular land
that is
developed. Overall
, the changes occurred not only all over the ground but also
reach the sea areas. The island was lost in buildings, yet become more attractive with several constructions that are built, however
, there is no tree uprooted.
Before the construction, there were only some coconut trees available on the island. However
, after construction, there are fascinating accommodations are built, such
as bungalows that stand in two circles and separated by a receptionist corner. However
, only the left circle is directly connected with the footpath with the receptionist. The corner, In addition
, connects by vehicle track to the restaurant in front of it.
Furthermore
, there is a new harbour on the seaside where the ship can land, it can be accessed only from the receptionist's place. Moreover
, there is also
a swimming area near the accommodation, and visitors can go there on foot.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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