The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph is an illustration of the
number
of shop Use synonyms
closings
and openings in a single country over a 7-year period between 2011 and 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that opened and the Use synonyms
number
that closed saw a huge fluctuation throughout the whole year. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of closures Use synonyms
shops
went down significantly in the middle of the period.
In terms of the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
closings
, which stood at over 6000 in 2011, Use synonyms
then
followed by a slight change until 2013, the Linking Words
number
of closing Use synonyms
shops
reached a peak of 7000 in 2013. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it dropped to the lowest rate of them and increased dramatically from about 5000 which stood remained the same from 2016 to 2018.
The Linking Words
number
of openings began at a higher level rather than that of closure Use synonyms
shops
, amounting to nearly 9000. In 2012, there was a plunge in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
closings
. People closed their Use synonyms
shops
about 6000, which went almost the same as the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
closings
. After a fluctuation in the Use synonyms
number
of closures, there was a decline which changed from 4000 in 2017 to 3000 in 2018.Use synonyms
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