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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room.

The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room.
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The
two
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 images illustrate how the differences between the
two
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plans
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 are creatively designed in an attempt to reconstruct a conference
room
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. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective,
it is clear that
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 most conference
room
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 features are arranged in a disparate layout in
two
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plans
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 despite having the same facilities.
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, the
room
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 in
plan
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B
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 is designed to accommodate a larger number of guests with more individual seats. With regard to the similarity and the capacity of the meeting
room
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, the first obvious similarity between the
two
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plans
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 is their entrance which is located in the top-right-hand corner of the
room
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.
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, both floor
plans
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 feature three main tables’ arrangments adjacent to each other in a U-shaped seating layout. In order to avoid distribution
while
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 meeting, chairs in
plan
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 A are placed in a way that all participants face inwards.
Plan
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B
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,
however
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, may help an organizer maximize the capacity by setting up the tables and additional
row
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 of chairs facing the outer rows. Another worth-noting difference is how a podium, whiteboard, and morning tea area are located in both floor
plans
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. A podium is relocated to roughly in the middle of the
room
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,
according to
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plan
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B
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,
while
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 its previous position in
plan
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 A is now replaced by the morning tea counter
instead
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 of staying at the back of the site. The whiteboard,
however
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, is situated next to the podium in
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plan
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 A, its position is moved a little bit to be behind the presenter's seat in
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plan
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B
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, plans, room, plan, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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