You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an appartment. You left the department in good condition but the landlord won’t return the deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: -Explain why you are writing -Ask for the return of your deposit -Inform the landlord of possible legal action.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing with regard to the rental refund which I have not received from you during the

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two months. I am the person who rented your apartment in No. 20, King Street from January to June

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year.

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the rental contract signed by both of us, I paid a two-month deposit , and you should have returned

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money within ten days after I

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the room. Before leaving the room, I invited you to come and

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all the furniture in the room. At that time, you realized that the bulb in the toilet was broken, so I bought a new one and replaced it right after that. The apartment was in good condition, and it is said that you have leased it to another person. By

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letter, I require you to return the deposit of $2.000 to me before September 10, 2021. If I do not receive the money from you later than

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time, I will submit the proceedings to your city court. I hope that you address

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problem as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Tuyet Do

mariatuyet82Fri Jun 09 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Double-check the use of formal and appropriate language throughout the letter for a more suitable writing tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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