You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an appartment. You left the department in good condition but the landlord won’t return the deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: -Explain why you are writing -Ask for the return of your deposit -Inform the landlord of possible legal action.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing with regard to the rental refund which I have not received from you during the
last
two months.
I am the person who rented your apartment in No. 20, King Street from January to June this
year. According to
the rental contract signed by both of us, I paid a two-month deposit , and you should have returned this
money within ten days after I return
the room. Before leaving the room, I invited you to come and Wrong verb form
returned
checked
all the furniture in the room. At that time, you realized that the bulb in the toilet was broken, so I bought a new one and replaced it right after that. The apartment was in good condition, and it is said that you have leased it to another person.
By Wrong verb form
check
this
letter, I require you to return the deposit of $2.000 to me before September 10, 2021. If I do not receive the money from you later than this
time, I will submit the proceedings to your city court.
I hope that you address this
problem as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Tuyet DoSubmitted by mariatuyet82 on
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