Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, subjects which should be thought in school is the most important topic and continues to be a controversial issue in today's
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. Most
people
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believe that
history
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is essential knowledge in school subjects . other
people
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feel that knowing
science
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and
technology
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are more notable than
history
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in the new
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.
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essay has some valid points on both sides which will be listed below. On
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hand, knowing about
history
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has some benefits(advantages).
First,
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reading the
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of our ancestors helps us to
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some
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studies. show how the incompetence of kings and queens has destroyed countries.
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, when
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know
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, did not same make mistakes in today's
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and try to learn and do better than their ancestors.
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, during the Cyrus
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Iran was a wide land but after the Cyrus, Iran become smaller for the inefficiencies of another king.
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people
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feel that knowing about
history
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are
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important.
On the other hand
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, some
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are of the opinion that we need
science
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and
technology
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in life more than
history
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with, knowledge advances every day and is necessary to know about
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and
technology
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because we needed entire life.
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, applications make calculations easier for engineering and save time for them.
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, medical
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has cured many diseases.
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, in today’s
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, everything depends on
technology
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.
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, without cell phones, communication is not possible. In my opinion, both views are important because all of them are essential and important in today's
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And it is necessary to pay attention to both subjects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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