Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, subjects which should be thought in school is the most important topic and continues to be a controversial issue in today's
world
. Most
people
believe that
history
is essential knowledge in school subjects . other
people
feel that knowing
science
and
technology
are more notable than
history
in the new
world
.
This
essay has some valid points on both sides which will be listed below. On
one
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hand, knowing about
history
has some benefits(advantages).
First,
reading the
history
of our ancestors helps us to
learned
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a lesson
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lesson
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some
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the
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studies. show how the incompetence of kings and queens has destroyed countries.
additionally
, when
people
know
this
, did not same make mistakes in today's
world
and try to learn and do better than their ancestors.
For example
, during the Cyrus
kingdom
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Iran was a wide land but after the Cyrus, Iran become smaller for the inefficiencies of another king.
Therefore
people
feel that knowing about
history
are
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important.
On the other hand
, some
people
are of the opinion that we need
science
and
technology
in life more than
history
.
To begin
with, knowledge advances every day and is necessary to know about
science
and
technology
because we needed entire life.
For instance
, applications make calculations easier for engineering and save time for them.
Moreover
, medical
science
has cured many diseases.
Furthermore
, in today’s
world
, everything depends on
technology
.
For example
, without cell phones, communication is not possible. In my opinion, both views are important because all of them are essential and important in today's
world
And it is necessary to pay attention to both subjects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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