Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years,
children
has
attracted the general public's attention. There are some country believe that Change the verb form
have
children
must have strict rules
of behaviour, while
in
other Change preposition
apply
country
say that Fix the agreement mistake
countries
the
Correct article usage
apply
children
can do anything they want. This
essay will give some informs
to support both views.
On the one hand, there are many Replace the word
information
children
do
not want to do some things, which are thought of Correct pronoun usage
who do
adults
. Change preposition
as adults
Firstly
, some children
are arranging their time
by themselves, for example
, they can choosea
a Correct your spelling
choose
choose a
time
for playing games or hanging with friends before they are doing homework. Secondly
, some children
want to eat fast food instead
they are having dinner at home with their family, they can decide what, where or when they want to eat. Finally
, sometime
the Replace the word
sometimes
rules
for children
's behaviour are unimportant in our life, people
do not care what are they doing? or whether are they a
kind Correct article usage
apply
people
or not as they do not need any rules
in their life, they do not to
Change the verb form
apply
need
say thank when they are getting Add the particle
toneed
somethings
from adult Correct your spelling
something
people
; some people
say that do not need
punish the Add the particle
toneed
children
since they are child
.
Add an article
a child
the child
On the other hand
, some countries must have rules
for children
. One important of that the children
must have rules
of time
, for example
, when they must wake up, when will they must have breakfast, or when will they can go out for playing soccer... it is very important to your life because when they are following like this
rules
they can manage their time
and their health. On top of that, when children
have strict rules
, it is very good for them in the future, for example
, all people
will like they are working with a person have rules
, they exactly about time
they will finish the deadline in the work.
In conclusion, from what I give above, I believe that all people
will have different ways to teachchildren
. Correct your spelling
teach children
Therefore
, the government should have further
consideration for this
issue.Submitted by buithuongkt on
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