Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years,
children
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attracted the general public's attention. There are some country believe that Change the verb form
have
children
must have strict Use synonyms
rules
of behaviour, Use synonyms
while
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apply
country
say that Fix the agreement mistake
countries
the
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apply
children
can do anything they want. Use synonyms
This
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informs
to support both views.
On the one hand, there are many Replace the word
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do
not want to do some things, which are thought of Correct pronoun usage
who do
adults
. Change preposition
as adults
Firstly
, some Linking Words
children
are arranging their Use synonyms
time
by themselves, Use synonyms
for example
, they can Linking Words
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choose
choose a
time
for playing games or hanging with friends before they are doing homework. Use synonyms
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, some Linking Words
children
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instead
they are having dinner at home with their family, they can decide what, where or when they want to eat. Linking Words
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sometimes
rules
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children
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people
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apply
people
or not as they do not need any Use synonyms
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children
since they are Use synonyms
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On the other hand
, some countries must have Linking Words
rules
for Use synonyms
children
. One important of that the Use synonyms
children
must have Use synonyms
rules
of Use synonyms
time
, Use synonyms
for example
, when they must wake up, when will they must have breakfast, or when will they can go out for playing soccer... it is very important to your life because when they are following like Linking Words
this
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rules
they can manage their Use synonyms
time
and their health. On top of that, when Use synonyms
children
have strict Use synonyms
rules
, it is very good for them in the future, Use synonyms
for example
, all Linking Words
people
will like they are working with a person have Use synonyms
rules
, they exactly about Use synonyms
time
they will finish the deadline in the work.
In conclusion, from what I give above, I believe that all Use synonyms
people
will have different ways to Use synonyms
teachchildren
. Correct your spelling
teach children
Therefore
, the government should have Linking Words
further
consideration for Linking Words
this
issue.Linking Words
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