The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. 

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the procedure through which
bricks
are produced for construction work. It commences when raw clay is dug using a digger machine following which it is sifted through a metal grid into finer fragments which
then
fall onto a conveyor belt. In the next stage, water and sand are added and the resulting mixture is either pushed through a frame and cut into simple
bricks
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moulded into specially-formed
bricks
. These are
then
placed in a special oven for two to three days in order to minimise their moisture content. The following three stages involve the use of a couple of kilns and a cooling chamber:
bricks
are first heated moderately in the first kiln to reach a temperature of between 200 and 980 degrees centigrade before being subjected to higher temperatures (870 to 1300 degrees) in the second one.
Next,
they are allowed to cool down for two to three days in the cooling chamber. The process ends with the
bricks
being packed on palettes and delivered to end users on trucks.
Overall
, the process of producing
bricks
is comprised of ten relatively simple stages during which clay, sand and water
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used to produce baked
bricks
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