The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of

some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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Both Maps illustrate an island before and after was developed for tourism.
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, over the period the area witnessed dramatic changes ,added a lot of accommodation, and in the middle restaurant and built pier with boats
also
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kept trees without cutting it The island is approximately 100 meters long, it’s done built several hotels on the west and East island for Tourism next and
then
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, there was a construction restaurant, and
then
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in the south added reception, after next apart was built at the edge of the river. The most noticeable additions are facilities like footpaths from the beach to around hotels ,and vehicles track
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from the pier and at around the reception end to the restaurant ,
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developed the beach for swimming.
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