Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, individuals are preoccupied with their busy work and
therefore
do not have time to prepare meals, tending to consume fast
food
. Many people believe that
this
negatively impacts our environment,
health
, and family relationships. I firmly agree with
this
notion and will
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reasons with different perspectives.
To begin
with, the packaging of fast
food
is not eco-friendly and has
adverse
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impact on the environment. Considering KFC and
McDonalds’
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Mcdonald’s
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, two of the biggest fast-
food
chain stores
for example
, all cutleries provided in the restaurant are nonreusable including paper and plastic which are acquired from the logging of trees and extraction of oil respectively.
In addition
, people prefer ordering fast
food
takeaway because of their hectic schedule, and
this
requires a lot of disposable containers, sending a lot of trash to the landfill. These non-renewable materials
such
as plastic take hundreds of years to decompose and create pressure on the capacity of the landfill.
Moreover
, fast
food
has completely changed the eating habits of modern people, harming their
health
and family bonding.
This
unhealthy alternative has
an
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increased
popularity
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in popularity
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over the years because of its deliciousness and convenience to get comparing to traditional homemade
meal
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meals
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.
However
, the rich
flavor
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of fast
food
is
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actually came from a
serious
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series
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of seasoning and processing. It is no doubt that
this
junk
food
contains excessive
amount
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amounts
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of sugar and situated fat which affect our
health
detrimentally as they increase the risks of suffering from chronic diseases,
for instance
, high blood pressure, diabetes and stroke in
long
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term.
In addition
, fast
food
also
has a substantial impact in terms of family relationships as it leads to a decline in family time and communication. As fast
food
is convenient to eat
due to
its
well
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packaging,
family
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a family
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member
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members
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may eat separately
in
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the sofa or
their
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own rooms
instead
of sitting down together at a table.
This
greatly increases
the
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individualism and harms relationships among family members. In conclusion, it is apparent that fast
food
consumption has created problems no matter in a diverse
perspective
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perspectives
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.
Thus
, the government should involve more regarding the promotion
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of health
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health
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food
and
exercising
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in order to mitigate the detrimental outcomes brought by fast
food
consumption.
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