Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Fossil fuel has been used by humankind as the source of chief
energy
for fundred
years, but it Correct your spelling
hundred
considered
as Add a missing verb
is considered
non renewable
Add a hyphen
non-renewable
resources
, which Fix the agreement mistake
resource
mean
that one day their reserve will deplete Correct subject-verb agreement
means
due to
persistence
exploration to meet human daily needs in various activities.
Replace the word
persistent
There’s
some Wrong verb form
There are
drawback
regarding Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
to
usage of fossil Remove the preposition
apply
fuel
. Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
First,
as a non renewable
resources, human perpetual exploitation to Add a hyphen
non-renewable
fulfill
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fulfil
energy
needs, mainly in machine combustion like car
, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
airplane
, and Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
plant
will lead to the depletion Fix the agreement mistake
plants
this
kind of Change preposition
of this
energy
. Secondly
, they emita
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emit a
emit
pollutant
that Fix the agreement mistake
pollutants
jeopardize
human health and cause Change the verb form
jeopardizes
illness
like cough, cancer and Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
respiratory
system. Correct article usage
the respiratory
Finally
, it endangers ozone
layer having Correct article usage
the ozone
function
to protect Add an article
a function
the function
earth
from ultraviolet radiation and in some Add an article
the earth
case
lead to global warming in some Fix the agreement mistake
cases
part
of the world. In 1998, Fix the agreement mistake
parts
energy
consumption in the transport
sector was to blame for 28% of emissions of CO2 the leading greenhouse gas. According to
the latest estimates, if nothing is done to reverse the traffic growth trend, CO2 emissions from transport
can be expected to increase by around 50% to 1,113 billion tonnes by 2020 compared with the 739 billion tonnes recorded in 1990. Once again, road transport
is the main culprit since it alone accounts for 84% of the CO2 emissions attributable to transport
. Using alternative fuels and improving energy
efficiency is thus
both an ecological necessity and a technological challenge.
Paying attention to this
condition, some countries encourage the using
of alternative sources of Replace the word
use
energy
that can be regarded safe
Change preposition
as safe
to
our planet, like geothermal, solar, and wind. Change preposition
for
This
energy
category not
only Add a missing verb
is not
environmental
friendlyChange the adjective
environmentally
,
but much more sustainable in the long run because Remove the comma
apply
its
Change preposition
of its
avalaibility
Correct your spelling
availability
by
natural Change preposition
to
condition
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conditions
in
our planet and universe. But implementing Change preposition
on
this
idea will not easy
because it takes much more time and high cost to research and to convert become Add a missing verb
be easy
energy
we need in daily life. May be
it Correct your spelling
Maybe
much
more easier Add a missing verb
is much
conducted
in Change the verb form
to conduct
wealth
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wealthy
country
like Change the noun form
countries
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
UK
, Germany, France and Japan with their cutting-edge technology, but it will be a problem in developing countries either Correct article usage
the UK
due to
their economic condition or Correct article usage
the avalaibility
avalaibility
of human resources.
In conclusion, alternative sources of Correct your spelling
availability
energy
is a good idea to be implemented because of
its advantage, mainly does not generate pollution so Change preposition
apply
it
will safe for our ecosystem and much more sustainable as well in the long run, but it has Correct pronoun usage
they
major
disadvantage Add an article
a major
due to
costly
related to research and time-consuming to realize the notion.Replace the word
costs
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