solar energy is becoming more and more popular source of energy in many countries. why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays most of the countries produce
energy
for
electricity
usage by solars
due to
inadequate availability of water
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source although
this
trend has certain upsides and downsides.
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of technology, nations can manufacture tons of
electricity
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energy
within a minute by the natural sun system. It is
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eco friendly
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and less pollution method to implement
energy
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system.
Moreover
, other methods consider
to produce
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electricity
by using water resources. As
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result, many lakes rivers and waterfalls can deteriorate and
it's increase
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the global temperature tremendously. In some countries, many people invest
on
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such
solar
plantation
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therefore
they can simply earn or get profit by setting these in their own home yards.
On the other hand
,several drawbacks associated with
solar
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the solar
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system are clear. One of them is,
cost
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of installation is higher comparatively other
energy
sources.
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, mostly it's
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on the climate ,If it is a rainy day or winter season ,unable to produce because
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the main source of
this
production is
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the sun
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.
Consequently
the
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less production will
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affect
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whole
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country
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energy
supply.
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, most of the empty spaces of a country
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or dominated to set solar implantation.
Therefore
many deprived people
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necessary
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liberty
of
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construct
building
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for their shelters.
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all these disadvantages
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, in most cases advantages
outweighed
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by
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the benefits of
natural
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eco friendly
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electricity
establishment. In conclusion, natural implantation has enormous advantages because
it's
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reduce
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enevironmemtal
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environmental
pollution and global warming.
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it's
very
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expensive method and maintaining cost
also
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higher. I still believe the benefits of
this
trend
far
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more significant than the detriments.
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