The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph is presenting information about the
number
of attendances who have taken part in three types of events
from years 2017 to 2030 in the Grandville Stadium.
An increase in number of
attendance can be seen in all event types which is considered Correct quantifier usage
apply
from
by looking at the Change preposition
apply
number
of people
who have gone to stadium
. The most increase belongs to concert Add an article
the stadium
attendaces
, there were about 25'000 Correct your spelling
attendance
attendances
attendees
people
taking part in concerts in 2017 while
it reached to
125'000 in 2030. The Change preposition
apply
number
of people
going to Add an article
the theater
theater
does Change the spelling
theatre
had
a raise and Change the verb form
have
have
become 5 times larger than before. In 2017, the average Correct subject-verb agreement
has
number
of theater
watchers was about 10'000 Change the spelling
theatre
people
, however
, it is near
50'000 Change the word
nearly
people
by 2030.
Sporting events
had the least change in the number
of people
in comparison to other events
but it contains the largest number
of attendaces
during these years. The Correct your spelling
attendees
attendances
number
of people
who have gone for watching a sport
match in 2017 is about 150'000 which has reached Change the noun form
sports
to
160'000 Change preposition
apply
people
by 2030. It haven't
changed significantly but no other Change the verb form
hasn't
events
have got attendances
as much as Fix the agreement mistake
attendance
sport
Change the noun form
sports
events
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