The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.

The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar charts illustrate the populace and the
birth
Use synonyms
and
death
Use synonyms
proportion in two different countries from 1700 to 2000.
Overall
Linking Words
, what stands out from the chart is that the population experienced an upward trend over the period. Another striking factor is the
birth
Use synonyms
rate
Use synonyms
higher than the
death
Use synonyms
during the survey period. In 1700, the population in the two countries was about 8
million
Use synonyms
and
then
Linking Words
it saw a significant increase until it reached a peak of 48
million
Use synonyms
in 2000.
Moreover
Linking Words
, in 1900, it saw the most dramatic rise over the period when it increased from 16
million
Use synonyms
to 38
million
Use synonyms
. One prominent of
this
Linking Words
data is that the
rate
Use synonyms
of both
birth
Use synonyms
and
death
Use synonyms
increased significantly from 1700 to 1800 (8
thousandths
Use synonyms
against 7
thousandths
Use synonyms
in 1700 and 23
thousandths
Use synonyms
against 17
thousandths
Use synonyms
in 1800). After an increase, there was a decline until 2000 with the figure 5
thousandths
Use synonyms
for the
death
Use synonyms
rate
Use synonyms
and 12
thousandths
Use synonyms
for the
birth
Use synonyms
rate
Use synonyms
).
Submitted by nlongduy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death, rate, million, thousandths with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: