The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.
The bar charts illustrate the populace and the
birth
and death
proportion in two different countries from 1700 to 2000.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the population experienced an upward trend over the period. Another striking factor is the birth
rate
higher than the death
during the survey period.
In 1700, the population in the two countries was about 8 million
and then
it saw a significant increase until it reached a peak of 48 million
in 2000. Moreover
, in 1900, it saw the most dramatic rise over the period when it increased from 16 million
to 38 million
.
One prominent of this
data is that the rate
of both birth
and death
increased significantly from 1700 to 1800 (8 thousandths
against 7 thousandths
in 1700 and 23 thousandths
against 17 thousandths
in 1800). After an increase, there was a decline until 2000 with the figure 5 thousandths
for the death
rate
and 12 thousandths
for the birth
rate
).Submitted by nlongduy on
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