Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays many

of

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sports

was developed since the ancient era and people

still

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conservative until

modern

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era which included some number of some

sports

which risked

to

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player injury. But in my

idea

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we should contain and conserve these for a

lot

of benefits that

i

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will describe

into

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below

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essay. It is important to maintain dangerous

sports

such

as football, boxing and etc. because of many advantages.

Firstly

most risk spots are the favourite

sports

for a

lot

of people around the

world

that provided amazing feeling and involved that activity to them as they stand at the side of the stadium.

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is

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in terms of culture, a

lot

of

country

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developed unique

sports

by themself for a long time.

Although

those included many of

denger

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danger

sports

such

as boxing because it can give watcher satisfy

while

watching them. And currently many

of

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unique

sports

that risk

of

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physical damage to players from a

lot

of countries

are well know

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and very famous around

a

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world

. Thirthy thing is human like any competition activity and shows everyone

i

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am strongest in

this

location. So that

why

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we can not remove risky

sports

from our

world

and we will find many

of

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injured

person

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after finishing

sport

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competition like that nowadays. In ,conclusion the

world

in modern has many

sports

and a

lot

of them are able to have

a different styles

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. And

i

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strongly agree to maintain all of them because these are evident to prove human have a beautiful culture which

develop

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for

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a long time

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presents humanity still have ancient treasure to show everyone and not the same as an animal.