The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates how many
billions
habitants from 10 different countries spend on travelling in 2014. Correct your spelling
billion
Overall
, the Linking Words
fisrt
one Correct your spelling
first
on
the top 10 that destinated more money on travel that year was China.
Going more into detail, Chinese people spend around 110 Change preposition
in
billion
dollars in 2014 on travelling Use synonyms
porpuses
, Correct your spelling
purposes
Linking Words
however
the rest of the Add a comma
,however
Asians
countries were at the bottom list with an average of 16 Replace the word
Asian
billion
that year.
Singapore had an average of 24 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dolars
on travel expenses, Correct your spelling
dollars
after
Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
was
Singapore and Unnecessary verb
apply
Southkorea
with 20 Correct your spelling
South Korea
billion
and India, Use synonyms
Malasyia
, Correct your spelling
Malaysia
Taiwan
only spend an average of 15 Correct word choice
and Taiwan
billion
in 2014.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
United
States and Germany destinated the same amount of capital on Correct article usage
the United
travels
, with an Fix the agreement mistake
travel
aproximation
of 86 Correct your spelling
approximation
billion
each so both of them were Use synonyms
on
the second and third position. Right after there is the British population, which Change preposition
in
costumers
dedicated around 54 Correct your spelling
customers
billion
dollars Use synonyms
on
travelling that same year.
Change preposition
to
To conclude
, the image lists the ranking of the top 10 countries that dedicated more money Linking Words
on
travel activities and Change preposition
to
it is clear that
China peaks Linking Words
the
top of the list.Change preposition
at the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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