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Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Giving
homework
 to
children
 is always a debatable issue as some minds claim that
homework
 should be given to
children
 every day for success in school
whereas
 others claim that there should not be a
such
 thing for the successful at school. I personally agree with the latter notion.
To begin
 with, getting
homework
 daily will affect the
children
's social life as they will not have enough
time
 to spend with their friends. to be more specific, they will spend their whole
time
 on their
homework
 and won't have spare
time
 to play with their friends.
Moreover
, it may affect their growth and development as they will take it as a burden. By
this
, first in school and
then
 at home doing
homework
 they will feel tired and stressed which can impact negatively on their physical and mental health that lead to many diseases.
For example
, as per the survey, it is claimed that 70% of students are facing physical and mental health issues owing to the burden of
homework
.
Therefore
, there should not be any
homework
 given to students. Moving to the other side
where
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people claim
homework
 should be given and believe that pupils should get schoolwork daily as it will enhance their learning for success in the classroom. When they
will
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do their
homework
, they will retain those topics longer
time
 which will increase their grade.
Moreover
, learners will be more disciplined as they will do their
homework
 every day. In conclusion, giving schoolwork to
children
 every day has few possibilities that students can do better in the classroom,
however
, there are more negative effects on the
children
 on their physical health and social life which I believe can't
ignore
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.
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