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Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime while others like to change the type of jon they do. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #work #type #job #lifetime #change #jon
Some individuals choose the same profession
in
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their whole life.In my
opinion
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 there are more advantages of changing occupation
instead
 of, Doing the same
job
 for years.
Firstly
,Varying their
work
for
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every two to three years actually have a lot of benefits
such
 as, We know the current technology,we upgrade ourselves by means of salary
as well as
position
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 of the
job
.
For instance
,if an individual is a Software employee,if he changed his profession after
certain
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a certain
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 period he
gain
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good
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 amount of income and other allowances
of
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company
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.
However
,it is not a permanent position.There we have a lot of
work
 and not a stable income and we cannot guarantee the
work
.But,I believe that varying the jobs
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 a good thing.
In addition
, By
the
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replacing the
job
 have
chance
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 to live in different places across the globe where,we know the culture and traditions,
chance
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a chance
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 to experience various types of foods and live a
luxury
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 lifestyle and explore the world.Even though there are demerits like moving to
the
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different countries actually
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disturbs
the
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life and people easily attack diseases.Sometimes,They get allergies or skin diseases because of water or food and
we
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 miss
our
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their
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 family,friends and
closed
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 ones .I think, upgrading ourselves by means of occupation has more merits actually it outweighs
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staying in
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a similiar
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similiar
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similar
job
 for
long
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 time.
To conclude
,There are
much
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 flaws
of
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 replacing
the
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work
continously
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continuously
such
 as temporary jobs and missing the family.
Nevertheless
, Taking
the
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risks and moving to
the
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new positions have
much
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many
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 benefits.
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