Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

Some people argue that it is good for

children

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to have city

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others believe that rural

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is ideal for them.

Cities

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have better

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to

education

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and different

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the countryside has better

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to

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outside their residential

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and has lower mental stress. The disadvantages of urban

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would be the

pollution

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and restricted outdoor lives

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the rural have limited

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and less variation in

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to a higher standard of

education

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and exposure to diverse social

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are the advantages of growing in the

cities

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. Unfortunately, the government concentrated their developments on the educational systems in those

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because many families are moving in since most of the high-paying jobs and best schools were built in the

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.

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, people usually transferred because of the chance to experience different

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all in one place, a perfect example is New York City which is known for being the most diverse city in the world.

Pollution

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and limited outdoor

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are the negative sides of living in the

cities

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. The

pollution

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in the air and noise in those

areas

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are high which leads to road traffic and

children

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are vulnerable to diseases and could have health issues. The limitation of outside

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affects

children

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since certain skills were not developed because most of the time they are inside the buildings. On the one hand,

children

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in rural communities have enjoyed their freedom to do outdoor

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and be surrounded by the natural environment. They are engaged in playing outdoors and their attachment to the environment is developed. Their mental stress is lower than those of their counterparts because of the slow-facing and laid-back

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in rural

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. The downsides are they have limited

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to

education

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and

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diverse social culture. Governments are not usually concerned about the status of

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in the countryside which is not good since

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of being able to receive the same resources, students are forced to move out. Social

cultures

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in the countryside are less diverse since other

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are not encouraged to move to rural

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. In conclusion, the advantages of

children

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growing up in

cities

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would be they have

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to better

education

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and cultural diversities

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the disadvantages are restricted outdoor

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and

pollution

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which are the advantages of

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countrysides

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. There

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resources in

education

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and

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social

diversities

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are the downsides of rural communities.