Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

Some people argue that it is good for

children

to have city

life

while

others believe that rural

life

is ideal for them.

Cities

have better

access

to

education

and different

cultures

while

the countryside has better

access

to

activities

outside their residential

areas

and has lower mental stress. The disadvantages of urban

life

would be the

pollution

and restricted outdoor lives

whereas

the rural have limited

education

and less variation in

cultures

.

Access

to a higher standard of

education

and exposure to diverse social

cultures

are the advantages of growing in the

cities

. Unfortunately, the government concentrated their developments on the educational systems in those

areas

because many families are moving in since most of the high-paying jobs and best schools were built in the

cities

.

Additionally

, people usually transferred because of the chance to experience different

cultures

all in one place, a perfect example is New York City which is known for being the most diverse city in the world.

Pollution

and limited outdoor

activities

are the negative sides of living in the

cities

. The

pollution

in the air and noise in those

areas

are high which leads to road traffic and

children

are vulnerable to diseases and could have health issues. The limitation of outside

activities

also

affects

children

since certain skills were not developed because most of the time they are inside the buildings. On the one hand,

children

in rural communities have enjoyed their freedom to do outdoor

activities

and be surrounded by the natural environment. They are engaged in playing outdoors and their attachment to the environment is developed. Their mental stress is lower than those of their counterparts because of the slow-facing and laid-back

life

in rural

areas

. The downsides are they have limited

access

to

education

and

less

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diverse social culture. Governments are not usually concerned about the status of

education

in the countryside which is not good since

instead

of being able to receive the same resources, students are forced to move out. Social

cultures

in the countryside are less diverse since other

cultures

are not encouraged to move to rural

areas

. In conclusion, the advantages of

children

growing up in

cities

would be they have

access

to better

education

and cultural diversities

while

the disadvantages are restricted outdoor

activities

and

pollution

which are the advantages of

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. There

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resources in

education

and

less

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social

diversities

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are the downsides of rural communities.