The table shows the number of sales of 4 types of drinks in the months of January, February, March and April in a small cafe.

The table shows the number of sales of 4 types of drinks in the months of January, February, March and April in a small cafe.
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The table illustrates the rate of folks who travelled abroad in 1990, 199, 2000, and 2005 in 5 different countries.
Overall
, the proportion of international travellers who visited those countries had increased over 15 years and reached its peak in 2005. The most favourite destination was Europe in 4 years given. The number of visitors to
this
continent was 280,2 in 1990 and there was an increase of 120 over 15 years. Meanwhile, the Middle East was the least region that was visited by tourists as their destination. In the initial year given, the number of people who went there was 9,8 and it grew by 6. A similar trend was
also
shown by Africa which was inclined around 10 during the period.
While
Asia and the Pacific had tourists overseas 60,2 and
this
proportion rose more than twice
at the end
of the year. The rate of folks who went to America fluctuated from 80,5 to 113,2
,
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and hit the top at 118,2 in 2000.
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