Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that that is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being qualified is important, especially in
this
fast-moving generation
. Nowadays the more qualified a person is, the more opportunities
and goals are achievable, but in the past, the opportunities
to gain
a qualification
were limited due to
limited resources and lack of availability. But in the new generation
, people
can maximize the opportunities
being gained by a person, allowing companies to reach with
higher qualified employees, Change preposition
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therefore
increasing the competition of each employee being hired, resulting in being more qualified and certified becoming certainly important. But in the past, getting jobs
were easier due to
not much requirement level being set by the employers, as in some cities and towns social class were low having employer to
pick employees with basic intelligence and knowledge, and having temporary Fix the infinitive
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jobs
with lower salaries. Therefore
, the education
was delt because some people
had the opportunity to be involved in
, and some Change preposition
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people
who were from lower social classes with low income were not able to afford such
type of education
and treatment lacking the education
level required by a human being. This
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In this
generation
in which the internet
is being modified and inducted in
the now day world, ways of working or thinking about ideas are substituted. Change preposition
into
Due to
the internet
new opportunities
are open, allowing people
to get access and communicate with newer people
and getting
hands on new technology which can allow them to Wrong verb form
get
gain
education
, and join themselves in programs to modify their qualification
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qualifications
To conclude
, having the accessibility to internet
in the new generation
has allowed many people
around the globe to reach new levels of skills and interest allowing them to gain
qualified jobs
, which again increases competition for jobs
however
in past
many Correct article usage
the past
people
did not get access to the internet
restricting them from gaining such
opportunities
, and forcing them to continue the level of education
being served to them. As per
my Change preposition
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opinion
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people
are more qualified due to
them having such
kinds of technology, allowing them to maximize the among of knowledge and skills being gained and learnt, which eventually leads them to have better
understanding of the work being done effectively, concluding them to become better and Add an article
a better
gain
a better job. Therefore
, job competition does increase the qualification
levels of young people
, as the better the qualification
the better the job.Submitted by maliehagul86 on
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