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Discussion Many individuals feel that it is good to live in a city while others choose that life is good in the countryside

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Essay type: Discussion Theme: Some community feel that it is better to live in a
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 others believe that life is a better in the countryside. Many
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 think, that it is good living in the
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, but others reckon the living in the village. In my opinion first though is good. Few
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 choose to living in the countryside because there are little car and
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 air in there is fresh. That's why many
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 who live in drop are clever and healthy because their brain breathes fresh air. And one of the good side living in there is quietly because
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 the area is a large few population live here and
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 there it's mostly quite here resulting in peoples nerve will be bend. Some decide the living in
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 and one of the good side living there is comfort because there is developed and
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 know how to live because folk have seen engineering and they want
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 human starts respect himself.
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 fixed
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 because there good education because educated
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 do not want to work and live in the landscape they will choose to live in the
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. If
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 strengles the formation in village
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 moved to there and the whole country becomes the
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 In summary though living in environment is good and useful, in my opinion living in the
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 can develop not only a person but
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 the state.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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