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Many young people spend a lot of time on the internet without any parental supervison or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the internet?

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As technology increases rapidly,adults mostly spend their
time
 on phones and it has been causing a lot of difficulties.
This
 essay will examine the worries of using mobiles without parents' involvement and possible solutions to
this
 problem. The two main issues of browsing on the internet are losing interest in studies and getting attacked to body problems when adults spend their
time
 on mobile daily to play video games, watch movies
as well as
 browse porn websites it leads to less focus on studies
as well as
 it changes their personal behaviour.
For instance
, most young people are involved in criminal cases and rape cases because of watching sex videos.
Also
,when using cell phones continuously leads to several diseases
such
 as ear and eye disease . by watching or browsing throughout the day without any gap automatically the eyes get red and water comes out from the eyeball and keeping the headsets all
the
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day got ear problems.Even though there are a lot of worries.
however
 the advantages
also
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 there like know the technology easily.
nevertheless
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, Some possible solutions to
this
 problem are parents should give a very limited amount of
time
 to their child to use the net.
In addition
, both mother and father spend
time
 with their sons and daughters,By regularly checking what they are doing on the net and
also
 by teaching some good values to the kids.
To conclude
 ,Adults usually do a lot of things every day on the internet.Many difficulties will face in the near future when kids are addicted to smartphones
such
 as losing focus on studies.
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