The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the results of people’s
coffee
and tea purchases and drinking habits in different Australian cities for the
last
4 weeks. In most cities except
Adelaide
, residents like to buy
coffee
or tea from the cafe the most,
while
in
Adelaide
the people there would rather buy instant
coffee
. In every , city there are fewer people that like to buy fresh
coffee
. The figure showed that Hobart and Melbourne have the highest percentage of people going to the cafe for
coffee
and tea, which is around 64%, in the lowest is in
Adelaide
. The highest trend that indicates the residents that prefer to buy instant
coffee
is in Hobart with approximately 54% rates and the lowest trend is in Melbourne. The city that has the biggest fresh
coffee
consumer rates is Sidney, which is between 40 to 45%,
instead
the lowest consumer in
Adelaide
which has a little percentage difference from Brisbane.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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