The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the results of people’s
coffee
and tea purchases and drinking habits in different Australian cities for the last
4 weeks.
In most cities except Adelaide
, residents like to buy coffee
or tea from the cafe the most, while
in Adelaide
the people there would rather buy instant coffee
. In every , city there are fewer people that like to buy fresh coffee
.
The figure showed that Hobart and Melbourne have the highest percentage of people going to the cafe for coffee
and tea, which is around 64%, in the lowest is in Adelaide
. The highest trend that indicates the residents that prefer to buy instant coffee
is in Hobart with approximately 54% rates and the lowest trend is in Melbourne. The city that has the biggest fresh coffee
consumer rates is Sidney, which is between 40 to 45%, instead
the lowest consumer in Adelaide
which has a little percentage difference from Brisbane.Submitted by rahmatikaislamia on
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