Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
have a mindset that modification leads to pitfalls and they would rather stick to their daily routines. Use synonyms
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others believe changing over and over again has positive aspects.
On the one hand, individuals who live stable, avoid new advances and think Linking Words
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change
may have many risks and complications. Add an article
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a change
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change
their lives and they imagine that modification can be stressful and disruptive, cause to anxiety and uncertainty. Use synonyms
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people
who have been working in the same job for several years may not want to switch to a new career as it requires learning new skills and adapting to a different work environment.
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, argue that it is essential for individual development and personal growth to frequently Use synonyms
change
and be productive. Use synonyms
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people
who believe changing positively is the key to success, try so hard to come out of their comfort zone. Use synonyms
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behaviour and characteristic can improve their knowledge and cope with confrontations. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they are aware that trying out new things can help them discover their strengths and weaknesses, learn new skills and broaden their horizons. Linking Words
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people
who travel to new places, try different cuisines, or learn a new language can expand their perspective and gain a deeper understanding of the world around them.
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people
may vary in their opinion , I think changing in an acceptable way is better than sticking to routines, Use synonyms
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it is indispensable to strike a balance between the two and not become too rigid or too impulsive in one's approach to life.Add a comma
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