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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, enhancement in technology and transportation enables
people
 to have a job and live in any part of the world. Despite the fact that it has some pleasant outcomes, it can
also
 cause serious issues.
This
 essay will present how
freedom
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the freedom
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 to
work
 and live anywhere positively affects
human’s
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human
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 lives but will
also
 show that
this
 can lead to problems
such
 as
undevelopment
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the undevelopment
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 of poor
countries
. Whilst acknowledging that there are some drawbacks, in my opinion, the advantages of freedom to
work
 and live in any region outweigh the disadvantages. One significant advantage of having
choice
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a choice
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where
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 to live and
work
due to
 development in technology and transportation is that it has made it easy to combine the occupation with travelling.
Such
 innovations in technology as online meetings and apps for business and
development
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the development
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 of transport vehicles offer society pleasant conditions to live and
work
 abroad.
Hence
, most
people
 find it very convenient to travel
while
 working which results in a boost in the number of
employees
. It is a great opportunity for both business owners to improve their working staff with new
employees
 and for workers to combine
the
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work
 with travelling. Admittedly, there are some drawbacks for
countries
 with weak
economical
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 conditions as most
people
 will be inclined to choose to
work
 and live in better
countries
such
 as the USA, Germany and Korea.
Consequently
, other undeveloped
countries
 will remain unchanged without
further
 development or even degrade
due to
lack
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 of
employees
.
As a result
, the inequality in the way
people
 live will grow.
To conclude
, despite having some disadvantages, I firmly believe that the benefits of the freedom to choose the living in any
parts
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 of the world are stronger because of new opportunities in
work
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the work
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 sphere for both employers and
employees
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication technology
  • transportation
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • freedom
  • work and live
  • development
  • increased job opportunities
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • cultural exposure
  • diversity
  • economic growth
  • globalization
  • social isolation
  • loneliness
  • loss of community
  • sense of belonging
  • expensive cost of living
  • housing
  • strain on infrastructure
  • resources
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