Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that environmental problems are becoming the most controversial problem nowadays, some people opine that
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problem
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too big for individuals to solve,
while
others opine the contrary, they believe that each individual has to take a step to make the difference, in
this
essay, I would like to give my opinion and discuss both views.
To begin
with, the source of any environmental problems
such
as the greenhouse effect
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becomes
basiclly
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basically
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human
behaviors
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,
therefore
, it is the individual's responsibility to reduce using any bad substances, using plastic
for instance
, if individuals take the responsibility to reduce using plastic
this
will .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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