You recenlty organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter describe the party and how it went explain why you were pleased with the hotel's service suggest some improvements that the hotel could make
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing with regard to the fact that my company New Creative held an annual party in your
hotel
last
weekend.
I am gladful that your hotel
kept the standard of the food and the drinks. Most of the staff were satisfied with the food, especially the cocktail. Besides
, we also
appreciate your hotel
’s decoration design , the decorations of the back job and the ballroom. All of that was an incredible night for us.
Perhaps, I have two suggestions that in case your hotel
could adjust the arrangement for a future event, that would be grateful. Firstly
, if the screen would not too bright, that would be better for presenting the achievements of the company this
year. Secondly
, we were a little bit confused to find out
the signage from the car park to the ballroom, it is quite difficult to find out if a person was not familiar with your Change the verb form
finding
hotel
maps.
On behalf of all my colleagues, I would like to thank your team for giving us such
a memorable night.
Yours Sincerely,
Winnie CheangSubmitted by wongsuun on
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