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The line gragh shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line gragh shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line chart depicts how many visitors went to the
UK
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 and the number of
British
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 people who went abroad between 1979 and 1999.
Moreover
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, the bar chart illustrates popular countries by
British
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 travellers in 1991. The first graph shows in 1979, the figure for visits to the
UK
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 was around 13
million
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,
whereas
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 the number of
British
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 residents who went abroad stood lower at 10
million
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. From
this
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 year until 1999, these numbers rose by about 40
million
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 and approximately 15
million
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, respectively. Turning our attention to the second graph, more than 10
million
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UK
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 residents had gone to France which was the most popular country at that time.
In addition
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, Spain stood at the second level ( 10
million
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),
while
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 the United States, Greece, and Turkey were ranked as the
third,
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fourth, and fifth most visited countries by
UK
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 residents in 1991, respectively. Each of these countries received fewer than 5
million
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British
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 travellers during that year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, british, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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