The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows
comparison
of Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
police
budget between 2017 and 2018 Correct article usage
the police
while
pie
chart gives information about Correct article usage
the pie
usage
of money Add an article
the usage
fund
in Fix the agreement mistake
funds
same
period of time. At Add an article
the same
the
first glance all sources of money, which they used, uplifted, Correct article usage
apply
on the other hand
, distribution
of funding Correct article usage
the distribution
is
declined slightly.
It is crystal clear to see that the national government is Unnecessary verb
apply
biggest
source of Change the article
the biggest
annual
budget Add an article
the annual
an annual
of
both years which accounted Change preposition
for
175,5
million Change preposition
for 175,5
gbp
in 2017, and Correct your spelling
GBP
also
it increased in
3,3 million after one year. In the second place, local taxes' funding increased to 102,3 million which is Change preposition
to
biggest
improvement Change the article
the biggest
all
of them. Change preposition
for all
Lastly
other sources increased Add a comma
,Lastly
38
to 38,5 which is Change preposition
from 38
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
change.
Change the word
slight
About
Change preposition
To
pie
chart, there is a decrease Correct article usage
the pie
of
Change preposition
in
officers
Change noun form
officers'
officer's
salary
which is 75 Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
percent
to 69 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, technological
proportion almost doubled in 2018. Correct article usage
the technological
Furthermore
, we can also
see that buildings and transport's
funding Change noun form
transport
was
steady in Change the verb form
were
this
two years.Correct determiner usage
these
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