The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst profesionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst profesionals in eight groups.

Describe the information shown to a university or a college lecture.
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The bar graph illustrates the average amount of time spent per week on eight types of jobs,
while
the pie chart portrays the percentage of stress levels among professionals.
Overall
, Businessmen have the highest number of
hours
worked,
whereas
the
lecturers
spend the lowest ones. Speaking of the stress level,
however
,
lecturers
are the most suffered of it followed by movie producers. Looking into details, the average time spent working per week is mostly spent by businessmen with 70
hours
, followed by movie producers and doctors with 60 and up to 50, respectively. Programmers and writers spend up to 40
hours
but no more than 50.
Moreover
,
lecturers
spend their time around 20
hours
per week. They are at the bottom position compared to chefs and lawyers who have more than 30
hours
.
On the other hand
,
lecturers
are the most suffering of stress in their job with 25%, even though their working
hours
are fewer than all the specialists. Movie producers are in the second position with 18%, followed by doctors, businessmen, and chefs up to 10%.
Furthermore
,  lawyers and writers have the same proportion of 8%, and there is only a tiny rate (5%) of programmers that suffered from that issue.
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