the chart below shows the proportion of busninesses making e-commerce purchase by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019

the chart below shows the proportion of busninesses making e-commerce purchase by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019
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The given bar charts illustrate the percentage of Canada Industry in e-commerce businesses activity from (the) year of 2015 to 2019. There are five big sectors: Manufacturing, Construction, Wholesale, Retail and the
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is Information & Communications.
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, the Information and Communication sector was the highest purchased position, followed by others which rose incrementally. Turning into detail, it is evident that Information & Communications started at over 60% in 2015
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hit the peak in 2018 and finished just under 70% of business-making e-commerce
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of the period.
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, the Retail (fields) sectors rose incrementally, beginning at just above 30% and ended (ending) at just above 50% in 2019 electronic business activity. Meanwhile, Even though, (the) increase in Wholesale (was) were not significant, just around 20% range by selling buying through the online markets.
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, the manufacturing sector (industries) fluctuated but
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of the period, it rose almost twice. Started below 30% in 2015 it was finished at approximately 60%.
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, Construction became the most significant increase, in 2015 e-commerce transactions were about 20% and rose to more than 50% in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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