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Some people take their vacation in abfoad but others want to stay in their own country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #vacation #abfoad #country
Well, in
this
 current era, spending holidays
while
 visiting other places is very common. Some
people
believes
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 that it is better to explore their own country but other folks including me thought that it is very crucial and beneficial to go to other
countries
 for vacation. On
one
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 hand, exploring other nations are quite interesting and gives
the
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individuals a chance to learn new things in their
life
 and be creative. If
people
 will visit other places in different
countries
then
 they would see different innovative things that they never saw in their lives.
Thus
, they can learn how things going on with different techniques and technologies.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in Australia in 2022 and it revealed that 80% community raised their knowledge
while
 visiting other nations.
Moreover
, it
also
give
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 an opportunity to
people
 to see others culture and share their own. Organizing trips to other
countries
also
give
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 a chance to look
several
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 cultures, food habits, daily
life styles
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lifestyles
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, learn various languages etcetera that makes
people
 more familiarize and confident. On
other
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 hand, some
people
 think it is a
wastage
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 of
money
 to go
to
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abroad for holidays. As
,
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 plan tickets take a lot of
money
 and folks need to change their currency as well which consumes
a
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much more
money
.
Secondly
, if
people
 will go to other
countries
 for vacation
then
 it would lead a bad effect on their own nation's economy.
Overall
, everyone got one
life
 so, it is
individual's
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 responsibility to live their
life
 in
a
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 happiest way by not bothering about
money
. If
people
 are working hard to earn
money
then
 it is their right to spend it by roaming in a global village. In
this
 way,
people
 will be more
familiarize
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 with other cultures,
countries
,
languages
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and languages
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 that make their lives better and easy.
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