The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates

making

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the making

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smoked

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of smoked

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fish

process

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

several main stages are involved in the

process

of making smoked

fish

.

In particular

, the

process

starts with fishing and ends up with selling smoked

fish

. Looking at the diagram in more detail,

fish

are caught with

net

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a net

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.

Then

, the

fish

are transported to

port

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the port

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by boat after fishing. The

fish

are

freezed

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frozen

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at the port.

After

this

, the

fish

are released to fresh water for thawing. The next

stage

is

cutting

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the cutting

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and opening

process

of thawed

fish

. It is followed by the

stage

of leaving the

fish

in the salty water for

certain

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a certain

the certain

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time period which turns

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the fish

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fish

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fish's

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colour

into

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apply

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yellow. It could

be explain

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be explained

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by the illustration in more depth, at the next

stage

the

fish

are

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is

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smoked. After being smoked, the

fish

are ready

to

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for

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packaging. The packages are left for freezing. The next

stage

is placing all the packages which are full

with

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of

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smoked and

freezed

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frozen

fish

into cold stores. The cold stores transport to the

fish

shop and the smoked

fish

are ready for sale.