The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart provided illustrates the average monthly climate and the average number of hours of sunshine every year in three urban areas. New
York
City was the hottest in July, with average
temperatures
almost nearly 30
degrees
, the lowest
temperatures
were in
January
, lower than 5
degrees
. The lowest average monthly
temperature
in
Sydney
was around 16
degrees
in July, on the opposite, the highest average
temperature
was 26
degrees
in
January
. In London, the highest average monthly
temperatures
were in July and August about 24
degrees
,
in contrast
, there were 8
degrees
in
January
. To compare the
temperatures
in these three cities, the highest monthly average
temperature
in July was in New
York
, and the lowest was in
Sydney
.
On the other hand
, the highest average monthly
temperatures
during December and
January
was
Sydney
,
on the contrary
was New
York
.
However
, three of these cities’
temperatures
had a cross in May,
therefore
, the temperates were similar in
this
month.
Conversely
, the most
temperature
difference was in
January
.
Furthermore
, the yearly average
temperature
was never lower than 15
degrees
in
Sydney
, New
York
was the city which had the most
temperature
difference city. To compare total annual hours of sunshine, the number one was New
York
, and the lowest was London. Even though the yearly average
temperatures
in
Sydney
were higher than in New
York
,
nonetheless
, the annual hours of sunshine were less than in New
York
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words york, temperatures, degrees, january, temperature, sydney with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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