The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the orange
juice
production process. It is seen that the process in general is complicated and requires a lot of time.
Overall
, the whole juice
production consists of seventeen stages. Starting from collecting the orange and ending with delivering them to the supermarkets. Firstly
, fresh oranges are collected and delivered to the factory, where they are washed and cleaned from peels. The collected solid waste is fed to the animals. Afterwards, extracted fresh juice
is either packaged, then
delivered to the markets or sent to a refrigerated truck. Then
, juice
collected in the truck is delivered to the factories in order to evaporate the water. Thus
, making a concentrated juice
. Afterwards, concentration is used to make a canned orange drink, then
mixed with water and packed. The package with concentrated liquor is then
sold at the shops.
Generally, the procedure is long and takes a lot of time. It is observed that the fresh juice
is sent to two different destinations, either instant packaging or to the creation of concentrated alternatives which takes a lot more time.Submitted by adinaabdukerim150 on
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