An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes

Dear Ana, I am writing

this

letter since I got your previous message regarding your plan

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two-week

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stay in my city. I am glad that we could meet you after a long time, and I am very excited about

this

trip. I have a few plans in my mind. We could explore different foods in my city, as you'll enjoy the different cuisines here. Apart from that, my city has plenty of beaches.

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, we can plan to do some water activities. Regarding your accommodation, you can stay with me in my place since I have an extra room, but if you prefer staying somewhere outside or near

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beaches,

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there are a few resorts on ECR road. Once you're here, we can

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discuss

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, I would suggest you

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bring plenty of summer clothes since it's currently very hot over here and the weather will be hot for the next 2 weeks. That being said, I hope to meet you soon or if you've any other questions, please do write back to me. Love, Hemalatha Palanivelu.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

181 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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