Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using the Internet to make financial transactions. What can be done to tackle this problem?

Internet
crime
is a paramount
problem
nowadays, the number of
Internet
users and services provided over it is increasing rapidly so does the number of attacks and crimes. I believe that over the years each one of us will face
this
problem
one way or another. So what can be done to prevent
this
from
happenning
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happening
? In my
opinion
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the question should be regulated governmentally
as well as
certain security
measure
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should be taken individually. First of all, I think, the
problem
should be recognized and dealt with on a national level. The country should have some kind of cyber police to work on
cyber
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cybercrime
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crime
complaints
as well as
the necessary laws and regulations. The thieves and criminals should be brought to justice and punished in accordance
to
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the
crime
committed. The punishment could start
from
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considerable fines and be followed by time in prison if the
crime
commited
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committed
had severe consequences. To my mind
this
can have a huge impact on the number of
Internet
crimes,
however
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it
also
requires a fair system which might be quite problematic if to talk about Ukraine, its policy and
police
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. And
while
the
problem
is not completely regulated governmentally, let's not forget about the security measures each
Internet
user can take in order to avoid becoming a victim of
cyber
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cybercrime
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crime
. It's vital to be attentive and
coutious
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courteous
cautious
all the time. Do not provide credit card details or other personal data over the phone, do not use suspicious websites and resources for shopping, do not download malicious stuff and it will positively impact your user experience and safety.
In
addition
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one can use special software and services to protect oneself like
vpn
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VPN
, identity protection software,
adblock
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and so on. To
conslude
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conclude
I should say that it is complicated to eliminate
the
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Internet
crime
completely, it might take a lot of
efforts
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and resources,
however
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if to watch out and follow the simple steps to protect yourself, it is possible to prevent
such
cases in the future.
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