The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the data of Fairtrade products,
coffee
, and bananas
that were sold in five different European between 1999 and 2004. Overall
, it can be seen that the sales
of coffee
in the UK have made the most progress while
the sales
of coffee
, the highest sales
belong to Switzerland.
According to
the sales
of coffee
, in 1999, all five countries only made a small number of sales
as the range of their sales
was in
between 0.8 to 3 Change preposition
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million
of
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euros
. However
, in 2004, the sales
have
improved dramatically especially in the UK because Unnecessary verb
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million
of
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euros
in 1999 to 20 million
of
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euros
in 2004. The sales
of coffee
in Sweden, however
, are considered the lowest in the table as their sales
of coffee
only increased by 0.2 million
of
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euros
. Switzerland, Denmark and Belgium were also
increased slightly in sales
as well but theirs were not as low as Sweden’s.
In terms of the sales
of bananas
, Switzerland had the highest sales
and it has increased considerably, from 15 million
of
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euros
in 1999 to 47 million
of
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euros
in 2004. The same thing happened with the sales
of bananas
in the UK and Belgium, from 1 million
of
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euros
to 5.5 million
and from 0.6 million
to 4 million
respectively. On the other hand
, Denmark showed a decline in sales
. It went from 2 million
of
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euros
in 1999 to 0.9 million
of
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euros
in 2004 which was almost halved of the total money made from the sale in 1999. Sweden, similarly
, their sales
of bananas
also
decreased in 2004 as well, going from 1.8 million
of
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euros
to 1 million
of
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euros
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