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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurants are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #waste #time #today’s #life #restaurants
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Today's world is more competitive and faster than past . Cooking
food
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 lass of time in promaya ye hectic life. Junk
food
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 restaurants are useful in the life hood is more stressful . I personally believe that people should not follow
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 with, diseases for eating fast
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 abo Street
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,
cost
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the cost
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 of
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money
maney
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money
, which is important on these factors,
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 as, it is irrefutable that fast
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 is expensive thing compare to other
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, They can shortage money for living standard.
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, the potential point is that variety can highly contagious diseases.
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: when they eat outside
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 regularly in
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 cases, they can endure diabetes, obesity, heartacctack . and many more.
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, they may find unsafely cooking systems.
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